Thursday, 27 September 2018
T3W10 Writing
This week I have been writing on slides we had some fun with editing. Please leave me a comment about my writing
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question
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Hi Angel-Mey!
ReplyDeleteYou have a great bright and exciting story layout! I love the different backgrounds you have used and how you have thought about interesting words in your story! Next time just make sure that the font and colour is able to be easily read, so your reader can see it clearly! Ka pai!
From Miss W
Hi there Angel-Mey
ReplyDeleteIts me Nikita from Rimu, I loved the story of Amie, Just there is a few things I've noticed while reading. There was some spelling mistakes and I just wanted to inform you about these mistakes so next time you could fix the spelling mistakes before posting it on to your blog. :D other than that the story sounds fantastic!
Nikita~
Kia Ora, Angel-Mey
ReplyDeleteI love how you have put all the bright backgrounds.I think that you should
go back and read it. Because you have a few spelling mistakes. but other then that I think you have done quite well.
Yours Sencerly Bridget
Hi Angel-mey,
ReplyDeleteI liked your stroy angel-mey but I think that the witring could be a bit bigger so people can read it and know what you are talkig about.Also did Amie do any art and crafts for firay hollow?Does Amie still uese the map sometimes?
from Bella.