I went to Alpine Ice and I did a review on it. So here it is I hope you like it and please comment on it.
495 Brougham Street
Opawa
Christchurch 8023
17.10.18
Dear Alpine Ice
In the School holiday's I came to your Alpine Ice and it was so fun
You are so nice because you help little kid’s ice skating. I like how you play song’s well kid’s and grownup’s ice skating. I love how you sale candy floss. Some time’s people like to ice skating to the beat of the song
I love skating but the thing that I do not like is when the light’s go of because I full over. Maybe you can have difrint day’s when the dico light’s on. Your is some time’s melted so that make ’s it hard to skiting.
I love to go ice skiting in the school hoiday’s . Some time’s when I get on the ice I can not get off because I have so much fun .
You’s are amzing at what you do
From Angel-mey
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