T2W3 2019 Writing

Hello Readers
The week we have been writing persuasive writing. I wanted to write about school uniforms should be banned. Please read my writing and  leave a comment about if you think school uniform should be banned? I hope you enjoy my persuasive writing and let me know your thoughts on wearing a school uniform.
Here is my Writing:

Hello my name is Angel-Mey and today I am going to convince you school uniform should be band,
here are my three reasons. They cost lots of money, they are green and white and take more time to find
in the morning.

Argument 1:

Uniforms cost lots of most. If your school uniform cost lots of money, your mum and dad may have
enough money for food or a school uniform and your mum and dad will have to make a big choice
between food or school uniform. If it was my choice, I would chose food because if you do not eat
food you can die.

Argument 2:

Uniforms are green and white. If they are green and white you may not like the colours and you may
like other colours. Like myself I do not like wearing green and white all the time. Wearing different colours
will make the school brighter and bolder and other kids will want to come to our school. Another point is
white clothes will get stained more easily than other colours.

Argument 3:

Uniforms take more time to find. If you wake up late in the morning, you may not know where your
school uniform is. If we wear our own clothes it will be easier to find and all you have to do is get clothes
out of your draw or closet. Your school uniform may be in the wash and and wet, so you can’t wear
your uniform, so it would be easier to just wear mufti .

Conclusion:

In conclusion school uniforms should be band because They cost lost, they are green and white
and take more time to find in the morning.