Writing: Momment In Time

 Hi Bloggers 

Today I will be sharing my writing. I have been doing moment in time. I have found it easy to do but somethings I do use past tense when I am meant to use presant tense. So I will be showing the activity when I had to do 100 words. This is how it worked. We had a photo and we had to desribe it in present tense 100 words it not a lot but here it is. I think I was good and desribing all the things around me. What do you think?

I can see a big bold star case it  is skiny, long and talll like a grafie. It smeels like rooten eggs as if they had been there for 100 years. The candalls are flikering on and off as if they are a humen with there nuckles opening and closing. The stares are screching like a little girl. As I tiptoe up it looks so creepy the rotten egg smell is really geting to me. The chandelier is all dusty like an old book in a drak, hair standing, crepy libray. I hope this is not hauted. Bang! Bang! The door is slaming up and down.

I found this very easy and mybe you could have a go desribing the photo hope you Bye have you done momment in time yet?