Hi Bloggers
Today was my first activity on my SLJ witch stants for summer learning journey. It was about commenting. So here is a comment I had to publish
There is is and I have to explain why my comment is a quality comment. I think my comment is a quality comment because I have explained in detail what was good about the post they published on there blog, I even said what he could do better next time and ask a question. That is why I think it is a quality comment.If you want to look at the post then clike on think link Sonnie. Hope you like my post what do you trhink is a quaility comment?
Bye Bye
Kia ora Angel-Mey, this is Mrs Grant from Manaiakalani. I was really excited to see your post about this activity, as commenting is such an important part of the Summer Learning Journey. The Art Colouring has been a very popular activity too and you included some very specific feedback for Sonnie. It was also very helpful to include a link to Sonnie's post too.
ReplyDeleteAll comments that are positive, thoughtful or helpful will receive points. Remember to submit a link to your published comment using this form.
Thanks,
Mrs Grant
Thank you Mrs Grant.
DeleteAlso I have summited the comment to the form not just that comment but one other one to. I am haveing to much fun do these blog post. I am hoping I can do every activty posted on the Summer learnintg jorney blog. Thanks for commenting.
From Angel-Mey
Kia Ora, Angel-Mey my name is Sulaiman from Owairaka primary School and i'm a year 6. When I heard that you had to comment to get I immediately went to a random blog and comment, but it's not just about commenting it's how you think about people's work and I like how you put Sonnies blog so other people can go on. Thanks for sharing and maybe come and checkout my blog Bye bye!
ReplyDeleteHi Sulaiman
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog. Also remeber to put this on the form so that it earns you point. Thank for the link to your blog I have looked at it and will comment on it soon. Maybe next time in your commenting you could add what you liked about the blog post and what I could do better. Have you done a commeting blog post yet?#
From Angel-Mey at yaldhurst modle school