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Friday, 20 December 2019

Summer Leaning 3

Hello Bloger's

It is day 3 wow all ready it is friday today. So what will I be doing today telling you how I would Achieve my dream. So I have an animation to show you all aobut it but this was basted on the Silver Fern's New Zeland netball team. So now it is time to show you how I would achieve my drea mand you will know what my dream is. Wait I would like to tell you that netball is my fav sport.


Bye until my next post but comment What is your fav sport? 

3 comments:

  1. Hi Angel-Mey!!
    My name is Nadia, I'm from Hornby High School and I am part of the commenting team for the Summer Learning Journey 2019-2020! So I will be commenting on students blogs these school holidays.
    This is such an amazing stop motion slideshow. It must have taken you a very long time to create, you must have a whole lot of patience. I like to play netball too, I play WD, which position do you play? I used to play softball too! I really enjoyed hitting the softball with the bat, what do you enjoy about softball?
    This is such a great blog post, but I think you need to re-read your post before you post it. There are a few spelling mistakes that you have made, maybe next time before you post, you could get one of your family members to help you with spelling. This is such a great post, you have done an awesome job!

    Keep putting in heaps of effort like you have been so far!!!
    I hope to see a reply or two from you,
    Until next time
    - Nadia :)

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  2. Wow Angel-Mey, that animation is so cool. It is a great way to present your ideas -if time consuming. You are such an enthusiastic learner, I am happy help you with editing your work before you publish sometimes if you like. Just share it with me (or email me and ask me to look at it) before you publish and I can look it over for you. Have a great Christmas, Ms L

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  3. Hi Angel- Mey! I'm surprised your doing the Summer Learning Journey. I loved how you put all the little details and punctuation. Great start. maybe next time you can add more slides in next time. Do you think your Summer Learning Journey? From Sahil!

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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question